You are a menace for ending the story there. I was completely pulled into Clara and Daniel's weird tender gravity toward each other and then suddenly... nothing. 🥵 Also, “I got very good at becoming whatever looked beautiful from across the room" is such a killer line.
How to narrow it down?! And do I go obscure or something that naturally goes together? Ok, let’s go with what just popped in my head…ranch in Texas, champagne, high heels
Clara's luck may be turning around. Daniel seems like a cool fellow. To the happy couple. Nice post.
Here’s an idea. Pick up the story and continue it in your style/vision. Let’s see what happens.
You are a menace for ending the story there. I was completely pulled into Clara and Daniel's weird tender gravity toward each other and then suddenly... nothing. 🥵 Also, “I got very good at becoming whatever looked beautiful from across the room" is such a killer line.
Menace? Me? 😬
I loved reading this. You have a talent for setting the energy of the story. I almost tasted that martini. Cheers!
Well thank you! I really appreciate hearing that.
Let’s get you a story. Name a place, a drink, and a piece of clothing.
How to narrow it down?! And do I go obscure or something that naturally goes together? Ok, let’s go with what just popped in my head…ranch in Texas, champagne, high heels
Oh how fun! I wasn’t really expecting a story, but you delivered. So thanks for making my day. I enjoyed reading it. 🍸